【Jogging】
Yesterday, one of our teachers said that students nowadays exercise too less. For some of my classmates, this probably isn't true; however, it is true enough for my. I decided to jog to the train station where I take the train back to school after work. It takes me more than 13 minutes to walk under my normal speed, but it took 5 minutes less jogging.
I reduced my speed several times to get enough rest, for I hadn't been doing any kind of exercise for a long time. After I reached the platform, I panted and panted, it was not so far as I thought, but much tiring. Maybe I'll try to jog continuously every time I'm back from the office, otherwise, I will be shocked by my weight after this winter.
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"exercise too less" is impossible in English. It has to be "exercise too little" or "exercise less than students used to". You misused this word in the immediately previous blog as well.
"it is true enough for me", not "for my". That's sloppy writing and proofreading.
"but it took 5 minutes less jogging." There's nothing grammatically wrong with this, and it probably even would be clear enough if spoken, but in writing, it's a bit confusing. I'd recommend saying it a different way; maybe "but it took only 8 minutes jogging" or "but jogging took 5 minutes less".
"After I reached the platform, I panted and panted.[, This is a comma splice.] It was not so far as I thought, but much tiring." That "much" has to be "it was very".
I envy you because you can go jogging. I love jogging. But because of my motorcycle accident last year, I can no longer run.
It is good to exercise regularly, keep going!
yes!It help me a lot when I used to do exercise. Keep going!!
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